“How does this piece make you feel” is a little high pitched/friendly

Tell me stranger, how does this piece make you feel?

 

A little too emotional, should be more neutral, dark, mysterious as opposed to condescending. More “tsk, tsk” then “you idiot”

(generally speaking, Carmella isn’t the emotional type, more interested in playing Devil’s advocate and poking the player as opposed to disagreeing with them)

You choose to be simple. But you confuse it with honor.

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But I’ll say this. Contrary to what some may tell you, I have no interest in using the dead as a weapon.
If we truly wish to understand the nature of our existence, we must bring death to life, and life to death, so the two may define the void between.

Do you have plans for your body upon death? If not, you may wish to consider a donation to advance the cause of art.

Wise men seek the answers to life’s questions. They don’t hide in vagueness.
I see your point. But my art doesn’t retreat to the middle ground. It simply concludes that there are many answers, and all of them correct.

 

 

CARMELLA and SKJARN QUEST

 

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I want you to serve as the subject of my latest art piece.